What makes a Santa video message feel personal?
The script is what separates a Santa video message your child watches once from one they rewatch until New Year's. Here is how to get it right.
Good messages vs bad messages
Real examples. The difference is instantly obvious — but hard to articulate.
Good
"Emma, your mum tells me you have been practising piano every day — even the hard pieces! I remember when you could barely reach the keys. Also, your dinosaur drawing is on my workshop wall."
✓ Two specific details (piano + dinosaur drawing), references a timeline ("I remember when"), uses the nickname form. The child knows Santa actually sees her.
"Leo, your nan tells me you finally landed that kickflip you have been practising since summer. I remember when you were just learning to balance on the board! And your space project — Jupiter looks brilliant with all those swirling storms."
✓ Names a specific achievement (the kickflip), references a timeline ("I remember when"), and mentions a concrete school project. The child knows Santa actually pays attention to their life.
Bad
"Hello NAME, you have been very good this year. Keep up the good work. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!"
✗ Could be for anyone. No hobby, no moment, no detail. The "NAME" placeholder gives it away. Feels like a 1990s mail-merge letter.
"I see you enjoy football, reading, swimming, drawing, playing video games, and helping with chores. I am very proud of all your achievements this year. You deserve a wonderful Christmas."
✗ Lists six hobbies — Santa sounds like he read a CV. No genuine warmth, no specific moment. Overload kills the magic.
Five rules for a Santa message that works
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